Minor Character

My favorite minor character has to be Finch's father. He does not say too much in the book, but he really offers words of wisdom to Finch, especially when she needs it. He is a wise, caring old fellow who knows just what to say and when. If I were to be one character in this book, I think it would be him. I like to enjoy life, and I think that if I were in a situation like his, I'd just relax and let things happen. He also shows care for his daughter, something I would do too.

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I believe that I told this story rather well. I was clear in the way I explained the story, and how it was important in my life. I could have probably expanded my story a little more from the start, but I pretty much thought up my ideas as I was writing. As mentioned before, I drafted my piece as I went along, making sure everything was right. I did not, however, feel it necessary to add any visual or pictorial representations into my piece. I listened to advice from every person, making sure to use their input as a tool-not a deciding factor- in my writing. I valued their opinions, but it ultimately came down to what I thought was best for my paper. As i said before, I will probably write my next paper with a longer first draft, giving me enough material to cut down on if necessary.