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I believe that I told this story rather well. I was clear in the way I explained the story, and how it was important in my life. I could have probably expanded my story a little more from the start, but I pretty much thought up my ideas as I was writing. As mentioned before, I drafted my piece as I went along, making sure everything was right. I did not, however, feel it necessary to add any visual or pictorial representations into my piece. I listened to advice from every person, making sure to use their input as a tool-not a deciding factor- in my writing. I valued their opinions, but it ultimately came down to what I thought was best for my paper. As i said before, I will probably write my next paper with a longer first draft, giving me enough material to cut down on if necessary.